Hi Giovanna. I love your butterfly! It's like perfectly crafted! How did you do the background? I like how you kind of swirled the different blues to mix together perfectly. Your butterfly looks like you took a lot of time. One thing I liked a lot was how you showed his love for being devout and pious by the heart and the pasta noodles. How did you make the comparison of noodles and childhood? I would've never thought of comparing the two together because they seem so different. A suggestion I would recommend is adding your poem so the reader/viewer can understand what you are referring to when you quote/cite textual evidence. Your tags were perfectly written and I like how you added personal information about the author and broke down his name to support the butterfly and the author in general. Great job:) Gold star!
Thank you, I did the background just by coloring it all in blue sharpie. Also, I have linked the poem below, but I can tell that it's not easy to find since it looks like a title (it's at the bottom).
Giovanna your butterfly is amazing! It is very detailed and creative. Your drawings are very neat and clear. I love how you added the texture and detail with the pasta; it also goes well with your poem. I can tell your really thought hard about what to do for your project. However, I agree with Mia, you should add your poem. Otherwise amazing job!
Hi Giovanna. I love your butterfly! It's like perfectly crafted! How did you do the background? I like how you kind of swirled the different blues to mix together perfectly. Your butterfly looks like you took a lot of time. One thing I liked a lot was how you showed his love for being devout and pious by the heart and the pasta noodles. How did you make the comparison of noodles and childhood? I would've never thought of comparing the two together because they seem so different. A suggestion I would recommend is adding your poem so the reader/viewer can understand what you are referring to when you quote/cite textual evidence. Your tags were perfectly written and I like how you added personal information about the author and broke down his name to support the butterfly and the author in general. Great job:) Gold star!
ReplyDeleteThank you, I did the background just by coloring it all in blue sharpie. Also, I have linked the poem below, but I can tell that it's not easy to find since it looks like a title (it's at the bottom).
DeleteGiovanna your butterfly is amazing! It is very detailed and creative. Your drawings are very neat and clear. I love how you added the texture and detail with the pasta; it also goes well with your poem. I can tell your really thought hard about what to do for your project. However, I agree with Mia, you should add your poem. Otherwise amazing job!
ReplyDeleteThank you, and as I have mentioned in my previous comment, there is a link but I can see how it's hard to tell that it's a link.
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